Appreciate it, Nathan! Coming from you, it really means a lot. I was anxious when I posted this (as one should be, I suppose), as I hadnтАЩt given it a read-through in years. ItтАЩs always had a special place in my heart, though, and it seems itтАЩs stood the test of time. I still think many parts of this are quite good.
Jesus, Andrei. Powerful. What a sensational (and dark) ending. I honestly wasn't expecting that when the gun was pulled.
You painted a rich set of characters and context with such few words here. Bravo!
Appreciate it, Nathan! Coming from you, it really means a lot. I was anxious when I posted this (as one should be, I suppose), as I hadnтАЩt given it a read-through in years. ItтАЩs always had a special place in my heart, though, and it seems itтАЩs stood the test of time. I still think many parts of this are quite good.
Definitely! Thank you for digging it out and sharing it.
That anxiety is always a sign that something is good ;)