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Jude Klinger's avatar

Best opening line I've read in a long time! Loved this!

Andrei Atanasov's avatar

That makes me so happy!

petrichor's avatar

eerie and quirky and good.

'One munchy, it seemed, was no longer enough. Bob fed it an extra crispy strip. That quieted it.' made me laugh

Andrei Atanasov's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it, petrichor!

Mark M. Ater's avatar

This story just hooked me from the beginning, couldn't stop reading 😂

Sara B's avatar

Uff! what a spooky story 😅 Thrilling till the end! 😁 The alien belly button!

Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Yeah! 😂 I think this could work well as a short film, maybe animated.

Bill Adler's avatar

This is a terrific story.

Andrei Atanasov's avatar

❤️❤️❤️

Delise Fantome's avatar

Out-fucking-standing.

Meg Oolders's avatar

Visceral. And made me the opposite of hungry. 😂😂