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Jude Klinger's avatar

Best opening line I've read in a long time! Loved this!

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

That makes me so happy!

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petrichor's avatar

eerie and quirky and good.

'One munchy, it seemed, was no longer enough. Bob fed it an extra crispy strip. That quieted it.' made me laugh

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

I’m glad you enjoyed it, petrichor!

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

This story just hooked me from the beginning, couldn't stop reading 😂

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

👌

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Sara B's avatar

Uff! what a spooky story 😅 Thrilling till the end! 😁 The alien belly button!

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Yeah! 😂 I think this could work well as a short film, maybe animated.

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Bill Adler's avatar

This is a terrific story.

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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

❤️❤️❤️

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Delise Fantome's avatar

Out-fucking-standing.

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Meg Oolders's avatar

Visceral. And made me the opposite of hungry. 😂😂

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