This one’s a micro I wrote a few years ago, which I’ve been keeping in my files as it never seemed like I’d gotten it quite right. But I finally felt like I nailed every single sentence, making the story the best I can make it, so I posted it.
I suppose I was practicing trying to tell a complete story in fewer than 100 words. I did write a few more of these, but this one has always been my favourite.
Ooooh...haunting!
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Short but intense! 😉
Powerful.
I'm always so impressed how people can write something in so few works.
Really nicely done, Andrei. Immediately pulled in and there's a lot of darkness and details within the brief span of words.
This one’s a micro I wrote a few years ago, which I’ve been keeping in my files as it never seemed like I’d gotten it quite right. But I finally felt like I nailed every single sentence, making the story the best I can make it, so I posted it.
I suppose I was practicing trying to tell a complete story in fewer than 100 words. I did write a few more of these, but this one has always been my favourite.
Yeah, same!